托福机经2016.07.02写作

  WRITING SECTION

  Integrated writing

  task

  Topic:

  Whether the TV commercials about medicines is

  reasonable or not

  Sample answer

  Reading:

  They are harmful

  1. TV ads are not objective,

  for they often conceal the negative side effects, which even they

  have not realized yet.

  2. Once the medicine is

  advertised, the sales will surge, which will mislead the consumers

  to believe that such medicine is very effective, so they will not

  consult their doctors. This is very hazardous for their

  health.

  3. The regulations and

  controls that government imposed on medicine ads are insufficient,

  for the government does not censor those ads one by one, which give

  advertisers loopholes to exploit.

  Listening

  They play a positive role

  1. The consumers have their

  own objective views and judgments. They often do a lot of

  researches in the internet or consult doctors before they buy the

  products, which enable them to have a comprehensive and thorough

  understandings of the medicines.

  2. The big sales of the

  products will inform the consumers some really useful medicines,

  which they did not know before. For example, a medicine used for

  prohibiting the habit of smoking was introduced to the consumers by

  ads, and it is proved very effective.

  3. Though the censorship is

  not conducted by one ad by ad, the government will seriously fine

  the companies that violate the regulations, so the companies are

  less likely to do that.

  Independent writing task

  Essay question

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.

  Use specific details and examples to support your

  opinion.

  【话题提示】

  I think competition can help create and strengthen

  friendships.

  Supporting idea:

  1. When we were children,

  playing games and competing with each other was a main way we found

  friends.

  2. As children get older,

  friends still continue to compete and strengthen their bonds

  through competition.

  3. In professional athletics

  there are also a lot of friendships based on

  competition.

  Sample answer

  Supporting idea:

  When we were children, playing games and competing with

  each other was a main way we found friends. On the playground

  during recess or in the park after school, children constantly

  think up games where there is a winner and a loser. Whether it is

  seeing who can race around the park the fastest, or who can jump

  rope the most in one minute, competitions like these help children

  learn how to socialize and make friends. Yes, there is a winner and

  a loser, but every day children look forward to playing and

  competing with their friends.

【必备资料】新托福写作模板经典范例整理(二)

如果你能够恰当的使用托福写作模板写作文,不仅能够节省时间,也能迅速捋清思路,构架自己的托福作文结构。所以初入托福的备考学生不妨好好的看一下,我们为大家推荐的写作模板吧,说不定是会为大家带来不少帮助的哟!

【必备资料】新托福写作模板经典范例整理(二)图1

新托福写作模板经典范例2:

From my point of view,it is advisable to choose A rather than B。 My arguments for this point are listed as follows。

The main reason for my propensity for _______ is that ________。

There is another factor that deserves some words here。

In a word, _______。 While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think________。

【备考每日练】GRE阅读题之动物的家园

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【备考每日练】GRE阅读题之动物的家园图1

每日一练

One explanation for the tendency of animals to be more vigilant in smaller
groups than in larger ones assumes that the vigilant behavior-looking up, for
example—is aimed at predators. If individuals on the edge of a group are more
vigilant because they are at greater risk of being captured, then individuals on
aver- age would have to be more vigilant in smaller groups, because the animals
on the periphery of a group form a greater proportion of the whole group as the
size of the group diminishes.

However, a different explanation is necessary in cases where the vigilant
behavior is not directed at predators. J. Krebs has discovered that great blue
herons look up more often when in smaller flocks than when in larger ones,
solely as a consequence of poor feeding conditions. Krebs hypothesizes that the
herons in smaller flocks are watching for herons that they might follow to
better feeding pools, which usually attract larger numbers of the birds.

1. It can be inferred from the passage that in species in which vigilant
behavior is directed at predators, the tendency of the animals to be more
vigilant in smaller groups than in larger ones would most likely be minimized if
which of the following were true?

A. The vigilance of animals on the periphery of a group always exceeded that
of animals located in its interior, even when predators were not in the
area.

B. The risk of capture for individuals in a group was the same, whether they
were located in the interior of the group or on its periphery.

C. Animals on the periphery of a group tended to be less capable of defending
themselves from attack by predators than animals located in the interior of the
group

D. Animals on the periphery of a group tended to bear marks that were more
distinctive to predators than animals located in the interior of the group.

E. Animals on the periphery of a group tended to have shorter life spans than
animals located in the interior of the group.

2. Which of the following best describes the relationship of the second
paragraph to the first?

A. The second paragraph relies on different evidence in drawing a conclusion
similar to that expressed in the first paragraph.

B. The second paragraph provides further elaboration on why an assertion made
at the end of the first paragraph proves to be true in most cases.

C. The second paragraph provides additional information in support of a
hypothesis stated in the first paragraph.

D. The second paragraph provides an example of a case in which the assumption
described in the first paragraph is unwarranted.

E. The second paragraph describes a phenomenon that has the same cause as the
phenomenon described in the first paragraph.

【备考每日练】GRE阅读题之动物的家园图2

3. It can be inferred from the passage that the author of the passage would
be most likely to agree with which of the following assertions about vigilant
behavior?

A. The larger the group of animals, the higher the probability that
individuals in the interior of the group will exhibit vigilant behavior.

B. Vigilant behavior exhibited by individuals in small groups is more
effective at warding off predators than the same behavior exhibited by
individuals in larger groups.

C. Vigilant behavior is easier to analyze in species that are preyed upon by
many different predators than in species that are preyed upon by relatively few
of them.

D. The term “vigilant,” when used in reference to the behavior of animals,
does not refer exclusively to behavior aimed at avoiding predators.

E. The term “vigilant,” when used in reference to the behavior of animals,
usually refers to behavior exhibited by large groups of animals.

4. The passage provides information in support of which of the following
assertions?

A. The avoidance of predators is more important to an animal’s survival than
is the quest for food.

B. Vigilant behavior aimed at predators is seldom more beneficial to groups
of animals than to individual animals.

C. Different species of animals often develop different strategies for
dealing with predators.

D. The size of a group of animals does not necessarily reflect its success in
finding food.

E. Similar behavior in different species of animals does not necessarily
serve the same purpose.

正确答案

B D D E

认真看完题目的考生,请允许小编为你狠狠鞠上一躬,征服美利坚不是梦啊!希望每位考生在考前都能做好充分的准备,得到自己理想的分数!

2015年最新GRE阅读每日一练(12月7日)

2015年最新GRE阅读每日一练(12月4日)

【出品】2016年12月10日雅思A类考试作文范文

Task:The charts below describe the numbers of people per household of an
European country in 1995 and 2005.

Sample answer:

The pie charts illustrate how the number of persons in every household varied
in an European country in years of 1995 and 2005.

Data provided for 1995 show that the percentage of two persons per household
was the highest, at 31% which was similar to that of three people in a household
( 30%). Over the next ten years, the figure for two people per household kept
almost the same while increased by 5% for three people, making it the biggest
share of the pie.

Regarding to the proportion of one person and six persons per household, it
both declined to 2% and 3% respectively during the ten-year period. On the
contrary, although there were only 8% of people who lived in a household with
five persons in 1995, the figure soared to 15% in 2005. The similar percent of
citizens lived in a household with four persons in the same period.

In conclusion, it can be seen that two or three persons per household was the
most common no matter in 1995 or 2005.

(175 words)

【GMAT写作】高分作文必备的3个关键点

在参加GMAT考试时,审题是非常重要的关键点。考生一定要花时间多读题干,准确理解题干信息才能对其进行有针对性的反驳,从而得到GMAT作文的高分。下面小编为考生总结整理了斩获GMAT作文高分的三个关键点。

【GMAT写作】高分作文必备的3个关键点图1

逻辑合理性

逻辑合理性怎么强调都不过分。考生要思考题干中的结论和前提是否符合逻辑结构,如果不符合,问题出在哪里,要怎样进行攻击和论证。

题目要求

前面小编已经提到过,所有GMAT驳论文的题目要求都是一样的,所以大家可以选择不看要求,而把时间留在读题干上。

【GMAT写作】高分作文必备的3个关键点图2

逻辑缺失

即logical
fallcy,考生的任务就是把题干中的逻辑漏洞全部找出来,并进行一一论证。逻辑确实即为作文的正确答案,和大家的作文成绩紧密相连。如果考生不能把里
面的逻辑缺失全部找出来,就不能得到很好地成绩,这是必然的。因为逻辑缺失的点会直接影响你的作文成绩。

以上三点都是GMAT作文考试中获得高分的关键点,和考生的作文成绩息息相关。考生在复习阶段要多多练习,多加注意,才能取得理想的成绩。

TIPS:GMAT作文机经很重要

GMAT机经的主要作用,是帮助考生熟悉考试内容,一定程度上节省考试时间,并在思想上给予考生安慰和鼓励。因此,如果有时间,建议考生能够把机经作文都看一遍。考生看机经,一定要认真地看,把每道题的几个答题点都在心中或纸上记一下,这样如果在考试中遇到,就可以节省大量构思的时间,快速地写出文章。

GMAT作文如何提升文章内容质量?

GMAT作文最佳长度和写作思路细节纠错

【Part2】Describe something you did which was a waste of time4

You should say

What the thing was
When you did it
How you did it
And explain why it was a waste of time.

【Part2】Describe something you did which was a waste of time4图1

Whenever I walk between home and school, I feel that I am wasting my precious time. You know, I have to spend an hour in the morning and another half in the afternoon to do nothing special but commute to the same place every day on the weekdays. Therefore, I came up with some ideas to make this work not that tedious. For example, I tried to run to my school because I could spend much less time going there and at the same time I was able to keep healthy. However, as you know, there are so many turns and crossings and traffic around the block. Therefore, I stopped regarding running as a way to save my time. Also, I tried to put on earphones and listen to English as a method to improve my English skills. Well, it was not practical,either. When I passed the crossings, I needed to focus on the street otherwise it would be so dangerous. Listening carefully to English might distract me from what was happening around me. Eventually, I thought of an idea to figure out this problem. I got one of my classmates who lived nearby to walk with me.Consequently, on the way to our school, we can chat and share something we are mutually interested with each other.

【出品】托福独立写作年轻人类话题结尾段写作技巧介绍

托福独立写作考试中,高频话题有教育类话题、工作类话题和年轻人类话题。在独立写作中,结尾段可以让你的文章看起来十分的完整。那么结尾段应该如何去写呢?编辑在这里为大家带来托福独立写作年轻人类话题的结尾段写作技巧介绍,希望对大家托福写作提分有帮助。

年轻人类题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today
have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of
society as a whole.

思路分析:

1.重述总观点:将开头段中的总观点通过同意转述重新表达

2.概括分论点:将主体段一和主体段二的主题句合并,用一句话进行归纳

结尾段范文:

?Overall, youth represents the future of the society, and has potential
influence to the society from the aspect of future development. ?Young people
not only plays an important role, but also guides the future direction of our
society.

范文解析:

1.此处重述了总观点:总体来说,青年代表社会的未来,他们对于社会未来发展的不同方面有着潜在影响。

2.此处将主体段一和主体段二的主题句合并,即年轻人不仅起着重要的作用,而且还指导我们社会的未来发展方向。将分论点进行概括,在结尾处进行再次突出总观点。

以上就是编辑为大家整理了托福独立写作年轻人类话题的结尾段写作技巧介绍,希望对大家托福独立写作提分有帮助。最后,小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。

【G类写作】1分钟认识风格迥异的雅思G类小作文写作

G类雅思写作也包含两篇作文。在作文一中,考生需根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件,形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。在作文二中,题目会给出一个看法、论点或某个特定题目的问题,考生需就此提供事实性的信息、概述或提出一个解决方案、论证一个观点、或评价观点和论据,和A类大作文基本相同。

【G类写作】1分钟认识风格迥异的雅思G类小作文写作图1

G类小作文和A类完全不同,重点放在“respond to a given situation with a letter”和“requesting
information or explaining the situation”。

重点考察能力:

1.engage in personal correspondence

2.elicit and provide general and factual information

3.express need and wants, likes and dislikes

4.express opinions, complaints, etc.

首先,G类小作文对考生最主要的要求就是合理联想,理论联系实际,这时候需要考生脑洞大一点,想象下实际情况来做描述。我们以常见的投诉信为例,题目要求只会给出主体内容,比如对旅行社的投诉,那么考生在雅思写作的时候其实需要去设想特定场景,有些考生会思维比较局限,比如单单描述导游的态度问题,这个时候问题来了,理由不充分且内容不充实。换句话讲,小作文更加看重的是效果,如果最后读了你的信件,让考官觉得理应得到赔偿,这其实就达到目的了。

所以,我们在写作的时候,一定要把理由想充分,比如我们可以从旅行安排与合同不符,比如过多的购物环节,这其实在跟团旅行中很常见。再比如住宿环境差或者餐饮问题,其实衣食住行都可以包含进去。这样再去投诉提要求才会显得比较合理。同时,在信件的开始,要介绍清楚自己,投诉事由及当时感受等等。写清楚例如时间,地点,对象,内容等等。当然,最重要的最后一段,要把自己的诉求,建议,期望写清楚。比如希望得到赔偿或退换部分旅费,有关部门作出相关调整避免再次发生,或者要求道歉。但切记不要提过分无理的要求。

其次,在保证格式的基础上,不能降低对行文的要求。有些考生的误区是,移民类,对书面语的要求较低,行文要求也随之降低。实则不然,首先参考的考生想要的分数集中,想要在这些人中保有优势需要一定的基本保障,这就是格式和基本行文要求。在格式方面遵循书信基本格式就可以,注意开头和结尾的
写法很重要,这是体现表达地道与否的关键部分哦。如开头的称谓一般使用“dear”开头,加上名字(given name)或直接写成Dear Sir or
Madam或To whom it may concern等,在称呼后用逗号。签名处的落款也有一定的要求,如果在称呼处用的是“Dear
Mr.”等,我们习惯在此处用“Yours sincerely”,如果是称呼“Dear Sir or Madam”,我们一般就会用“Yours
faithfully”结尾。如果和收信人关系较为亲密,Yours, With love等甚至直接留下名字都是可以接受的。

当然啦,不同的信件写法不同语气不同,所用的词汇也不尽相同,各位考生要充分了解各类信件的特点,找准格式摸清重点,随机应变~

真正有用的托福口语跟读方法!

  你听说过跟读吗?

  一直以来,托福界最大的两个谣言:1. 只要听写听力就提分!2. 只要跟读口语就提分!nah~

  虽然很多人都乖乖照做,但却还是迟迟不分手。究其原因就在于:很多同学其实根本就不知道要如何做听写和跟读。

  你真的会跟读吗?

  今天,我们用最良心的跟读材料手把手教大家一套:能够同时改善你的发音、语法和表达,全面提升口语、写作和语感的最强跟读法!

  主页君亲身感受:自从Pt大大介绍了跟读方法给主页君,腰不酸了!腿不疼了!连说口语都不磕巴啦!托福妥妥了!作为一个善良宝宝的主页君,有这种好方法当然要拿出来跟大家一起分享啦<(?)>

  跟读步骤

  ★ 一、读原文

  把自己易错的词或音标记出来

  ★ 二、跟读

  跟着原文的录音一句一句读,熟练为止

  ★三、语料积累

  摘抄原文的好词好句

  ★ 四、复述原文

  根据好词好句独立复述原文

  ★ 五、与伙伴们互评

  将熟练的复述录音找到亦鸥小伙伴点评,或发到亦鸥跟读团讨论组里

  举个栗子!

  【housing】

  A friend of yours is looking for a new place to live and has

  asked for your advice. What do you think is the most important

  characteristic of a good

  I think it’sreally important for a neighborhood to be close to

  a transportation hub, say a metroor bus station, so that it’s

  convenient for him to go anywhere.

  On weekdays, when he needs to go to work, he doesn’tneed to

  get up too early just because his place is far away from the bus

  station.

  On weekends, whenhe hangs out with friends, he doesn’t need to

  worry about coming homelate because it only takes him 5 minutes to

  walk from the station to his apartment. This is especially

  important in the winter time.

  So I think being close to atransportation hubis quite

  essential.

  优秀表达积累

  1. transportation hub 交通枢纽

  2. it’s convenient for him to go anywhere 方便某人去任何地方

  3. doesn’tneed to get up too early just because his place is

  far away from the bus station “不用早起”的表述

  4. doesn’t need to worry about doing sth. 不必担心做某事

  5. quite essential 相当重要 话题:住所(常见话题),交通,便利(万能理由)

  期待您的加入!

英国留学:硕士毕业后留在英国雅思保分协议有用吗的六种方式

  第一种:申请短期 Tier 5签证

  短期工作签证 Tier 5,根据工作性质的不同,时长为12个月或24个月。适用人群为从事创作和艺术还有英国政府认证的实习
雅思保分协议有用吗工作机会。

  ●申请条件为:

  1、担保公司的相关资质证书

  2、账户里要有存满90天至少945磅的存款

  第二种:Tier 2 工作签证

  找到一个愿意提供长期职位的公司作为担保申请Tier 2 工作签证。一般的工签长度为3年,最多可以申
BEC替考有风险吗请5年。有公司做担保,在英国工作5年之后就可以申请永居了。

  ●工签的申请条件为:

  1、担保公司的相关资质证书(不是所有的公司都有担保资质)

  2、一份符合工签标准的薪水 (20800英镑)

  3、达到一定的英语语言要求 (在英留学的学生一般都不
CAE代考真的吗需要再考英语)

  4、账户里要有足够的存款证明有能力在英国生活 (账户里的余额需要超过 945磅)

  5、出示过去5年的旅行记录或证明有能力旅行的材料

  第三种:杰出人才签证

  申请者适合在科学、人文、工程、医学、电子科技、艺术领域的人才。只要有相关机
ACT考试替考构做担保,在网上提交申请,三周之内便可收到结果。签证时长为5年。

  ●申请条件:

  1、通过Home Office的人才认证

  2、得到相关权威机构的认可

  第四种:创业者签证

  创业者签证,申请者需要有在英国创业的打算。签证的长度为3年4个月,签证结
澳洲雅思面授答案束之后可以继续申请续签。

  ●申请条件:

  1、至少5万英镑的投资/启动资金

  2、年龄需要在16岁以上

  3、账户里要有足够的资金支持你在英国期间的生活

  4、达到一定的英语语言要求

  第五种:投资签证

  这种签证是最方便快捷的,但花费最高。提交申请3周内便可收到结果。签证的时长为3年4个月,之后可以续签。

  ●申请条件:

  1、至少有200万磅的投资资金

  2、年龄在18岁或以上

  3、证明这笔资金来自你或者伴侣

  4、有英国银行账户

  第六种:结婚签证

  最后一种方法就是和当地人结婚。幸运的小伙伴在留学的业余生活中碰到对的那个人的话,就安定下来吧~

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